Yo there,
I can truly see how my style evolved, and got better, as the chapters start to pile in the book.
Early in the book, I can still feel some awkwardness, but later on, the storytelling, and description gets better, and more natural.
And no, I won’t change the early chapters, I like them, they are not bad, nor incorrect, they are just a bit “green”.
That’s it.
Have an as eventful, or eventless day, as you wished for.